Monday, November 9, 2009


skinny girls
writhing with nightmares
chained in
drawn out
devil girls
shrieking their curses
legs bare
sprinting through corn-fields
past the curtains
cross the wood floors
cracked and caving
trapped inside the old house
with the sting
of her sin

(randomly inspired by Black Snake Moan)


betterwithsmoke said...

Inspired by another media/artistic work or not, I think this is quite evocative. Might even inspire me to write a non-erotica piece of short fiction. If I do, I'll have to link back to your post here so that folks know who to thank (or blame) for my inspiration.

Alkemie Jane said...

thank you so much! :-D i can't wait to see what you come up with!