Monday, November 9, 2009

SnakeBite

skinny girls
writhing with nightmares
chained in
drawn out
devil girls
shrieking their curses
legs bare
sprinting through corn-fields
tip-toe
past the curtains
cross the wood floors
cracked and caving
trapped inside the old house
with the sting
of her sin



(randomly inspired by Black Snake Moan)

2 comments:

betterwithsmoke said...

Inspired by another media/artistic work or not, I think this is quite evocative. Might even inspire me to write a non-erotica piece of short fiction. If I do, I'll have to link back to your post here so that folks know who to thank (or blame) for my inspiration.

Alkemie Jane said...

thank you so much! :-D i can't wait to see what you come up with!